This is a really good poem! It flowed really well and it was so beautiful! Great job!
Love alwayz....
hAiLy
XOXOXOXOXOXO

i loved the rhyme scheme in this, it made the poem have rhythm... i also liked the message
excellent write

That was beautiful! It was written very well and the message was good! Loved it! 5/5 Take Care~! Brooke

WOW im speechless. this poem was REALLY good. 5/5

Not as good as the last one, but still, good one..

You chose a very difficult rhyming scheme, and didn't succeed perfectly...Some ofthe rhymes seemed forced, and others again didn't really rhyme, or messed up the flow...But some worked out great...

This one could use some revising...

but still...good poem...I like how you put your thoughts into words...you are good at this!

your stuff is seriously amazing. I love it... wow

excellent. you are very talented
~Freak~