Comments : Persistence

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemma

    Aww this poem is really sweet. Great write!

    Emma xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean

    Very good poem, nice work mate :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I enjoyed this poem a lot! It was simply written but the message it conveyed was deep and meaningful...Keep writing, very nice write.
    Dorotea

  • 18 years ago

    by samuel

    thank you all.

  • 18 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    love the deep meaning of this poem... Laura x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Samuel, Very inspirational and a beautiful message. Congratulations on winning the contest. Great job. hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 18 years ago

    by riya

    hi samuel,
    its a simple poem wid awesome meaning.u guys put the best things in the simplest ways and make things beautiful.keep up the good work,keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by rbmo401

    i liked it for the most part. thanks for the read. rbmo401

  • 18 years ago

    by samuel

    thanks all - i really appreciate.

  • 18 years ago

    by samuel

    thanks all - i really appreciate.

  • 18 years ago

    by Treakle

    nice poem, really professional, makes you think, well done on winning contest.
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by The-Blood-Vile

    Thats kool

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky drake

    congratulations.....Loved the poem, and I really want to read more of your work. I'm impressed, Please read a few of mine if you can.Love ya Becky

  • you use such imagination in this you have such a way with words its amazing how you put those words into a poem like this. you're a great writer keep writing.

    CS

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥~*Mandii*~♥

    no offence but i need to say-- i didnt understand it at all! i didnt get it... so it kinda sucked.. sorry for my hurtful honesty... i gave u a 5/5 anyway lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Spam

    That's great! certainly unlike any other poem i've read!

  • 18 years ago

    by samuel

    you are not stupid, but funny!

  • 18 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing.

    Plz read some of my poems n give me some comment abt how i can be like u in writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by tracie


    very good..like your work
    pls read..and comment on mine
    i am new to this though!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by tracie


    good..like your work
    pls read and comment on mine.thks