5 stars for this one... GREAT poem!!! please check out my poem "Butterflies" please comment/vote.. thanks a lot.. hugs from september!!

Wow, that's a really imaginative. I love how you have this story like quality about your writing. 5/5.

Aww, yes it is different, but I loved it! The whole story line and all was amazing 5

Love,
Heather.

stellaloona i did spell check and nothing came up. what did i spell incorrectly

haha, I don't even see what you spelled incorrectly except for curtains in the title .

Love,
Heather.

ooops thanks heather *looks embarrassed* lol i bet i spelt embarrassed wrong as well didnt i!

Wow...I'm speechless! This is brilliant! It was so intriguing and deep! Well done...Holly

thankyou i really apreciate that, a proper decent analysis, i very rarely get anything close, thank you

I agree with Nada..i absolutely loved the imagery, i could picture so clearly what you were describing. This is one of your best pieces in my view. Can't really find any faults with it at all! Brilliant xxxxx

Hey, really gud poem. Kinda gave the creeps lol. Keep writin hun. xx ltp