Comments : I Miss The Old You~

  • 12 years ago

    by NoPatience

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    Another sweet poem and well worded but the topics you have a so personal that you don't have a true voice Try to write something off the top of your head like how you would view something like fire for exsample. Paint me a picture of fire through words. If you want to be a good poet then learn to expand your way of thinking. Think about it...

  • 12 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    awww such a nice/sad poem great job...

  • 12 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow, great poem.. 5/5!!

  • 12 years ago

    by rachel

    wow xcellent poem, it reli gt 2 me cus i can relate so much! thanx 4 ur comments, havent gt round 2 fillin my profile yet lol, im glad u liked my poems it means alot comin frm some1 with soo much talent xxxx 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Richard

    i can relate to this poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    This one was good, but there are some flaws. For example, the flow is really choppy because some lines are so much longer than the others, and some of the rhymes are very obviously forced. Work on that some more. I liked the idea of forgiveness in this poem, because it shows that you're willing to be there for the person even if they aren't there for you. Keep writing, I enjoyed this poem.
    Satuxxa

  • 12 years ago

    by --SlIpPin_AwAy--

    omg i can relate to this so much. it reminds me of one of my friends. Great job! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Thanx everybody for all the nice comments! It means sooo much to me! ♥

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    well done .. nice poem! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Morgan

    this poem was really good!! thanks for your comment about my nature poem...thanks so much for telling me the truth!! that means a lot to me
    thanks again

  • 12 years ago

    by Arora

    I can relate to that.... meh best friend left me... but I hope you feel better if that's true <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    It's good. Man you really liked this friend did you not?

  • 12 years ago

    by Corrie

    wow, i love ur poems, they feel like theres a meaning to them.. like i could see most of them being a way that i would feel, you do a awesome job putting ur feelings into words! 5/5 *KISSES*~Corrie

  • 12 years ago

    by Nici

    You managed to bring your emotions out through the words that you chose. A difficult task that was well achieved.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 12 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    *Agrees with Corrie*

  • 12 years ago

    by jencam

    very very emotional. nice work

  • 12 years ago

    by jencam

    very very emotional. nice work

  • 12 years ago

    by Synyster

    reminds me of an old friend...

  • Omg! That's also soo good!!! I can definitally relate to that...great job, i love the last line, by the way.