Comments : I Have To Move On...

  • I Loved It 5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    well done

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Good poem. I like this part:

    I can’t believe we were ever friends
    And I'm sure you would agree

    Great job, keep it up.

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    yet another great poem..5/5

    love shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Interesting.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Monkey See~*~Monkey Do*~

    Beautiful poem, nicely written. i really liked this poem.
    5/5

    -Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Corrie

    Excellent job hun!5/5 *KISSES*~Corrie

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Now that was awesome, great job!!!! I loved everything about it

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Now that was awesome, great job!!!! I loved everything about it

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    Full of emotion and an interesting read.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    excellent. i can relate
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Not the best I've ever seen, but definitely not bad. (Sorry it took me so long to reply to your comment on my poem, computer was being stupid.)

    Anyway, you have some strong lines throughout your poem, but some lines seem like they were written only to fit the rhyme scheme.

    Otherwise, great expression of feeling.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    That was a very good poem. I hope you keep writing great poetry!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Everything has been said, so i'll simply add...well done, truly.

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Brilliant. just Brilliant.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Excellent!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    nice work

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    great job, again! i'm so glad you have this talent to write at 13!! i hated poetry at 13!! lol- that is so good.. never stop writing, your great and your going to evolve into a more magnificent writer than you already are!! great job! keep it up
    love always,
    Abcede!:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    If I could I'd give it a 6