And Then It Hurt

I really liked this.
Your rage and pain is posessed in the piece and I loved the repetition "it hirt-hurt-hurt"
And the description of "hurting to breath..."

i loved your metaphors. Especially,
"I screamed like a child frozen in the womb
Kicking my way out from the tainted skin
I opened wide to take in the air"

and
"Like a cat stuck in a fox hole with its tail between its legs
I was afraid
Afraid to move
Afraid to look"

You display fear so, so well in those symbols and I really admired them.
Well done

(p.s. this shouldn't be a 1, someone is stalking you)

Fantastic poem hun...so deep and a lil touch of darkness in there. Loved it, i love your work so much. i hope your ok xxxxx

Interesting poem. I like it. Surly didn't deserve the one somebody voted for you. Read some of my work if you find the time.

so original and beautiful loved this peice.