Comments : Fallen suicide

  • 18 years ago

    by LoVeAbLeShOrTie

    This is one of ur best poems!! it has a lot of meaning to it... keep up the good work
    lylas always,
    shortie

  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    wow, that was a really good poem, and i can realte really well, my parents are the same, almost they do worse things sometimes, well a very excellent poem i loved it,
    <3 always <3
    -Kit

  • 18 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    This was very deep.. really good.. i didn't find much wrong wit it at all!! - my b-day is accually this friday, and i just felt really down ( i had a dream about that). lol... Great write though!

    Love Alwayz,
    Katie Schettler

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    wow this was full of emotion... and it sends a very powerful mesage. Take care and I hope that things are working out for you, or at least getting better.

    love of luv hayley J

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    wow thats a great poem your really talented!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    great poem. it was so full of emotion. 5/5
    crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by :*:A:L:Y:C:I:A:*:

    This is REALLY good. I give you a 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    WOW!!! My favorite poem of yours...of the site! Really great job on this one and I love the last stanza because thats how I feel to! You are on of my favorite writers and I am going to add you to my favs:)

  • 18 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    That is an awesome poem i love that it describes me in different ways except i have wanted to die so many times but certain people have pulled me through ....i love your poems

    ~angel~

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Thats fu**in crazy and sceary

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Another brilliant write . . keep up all the great poetry work it really is amazing. I hope everything is ok :) xXx

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    I was getting into it until i saw 'ppl'
    I'm sorry, but slang belongs in slang poems. people is only three extra letters