Not bad hun... with a little bit more rhyming your poem would stand out a bit more..great try 5/5

i like! I don't agree with that ^ rhyming is so restricting...bleh. nehoo good job!! keep it up!

nice poem 5/5

great poem again julie!!!!!
keep it up
raaaaawwwr
love ya heaps and tones
james

Good poem. Just keep writing!