Beautiful!
Lets Hope She Accepts,
What A Lucky Lady.

Failed

Thats really lovely Amit, well done once again

Oh Amit, how beautiful. If anyone said those words to me, my answer would be, YES!!!!! You do have a loving heart. Good luck. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Amit, that poem touched my heart very much, that lucky girl have your heart and I think its wonderful that she does that you two are so much in love. I do excatly feel the same way for my boyfriend and I hope someday he'll ask me to marry him (Not to soon because i will not accept just yet but he so touches my heart)! Well, good luck and in your words "Always believe in Love" Kristen

beautiful written amit...i know how meaning this message.."always believe in love" keep write on amit coz you're one of myfav list...take care,
-----clouds.

Amit, You've taken my breath away, my friend. Such a beautiful and precious poem. Masterpiece, once again. You are truly a romantic with a loving heart. Simply Beautiful. hugs, love, *Ann*

amit myfriend, i know i've read this your work.... and i'm not wanted to comment any...just wanna to tell you.......email me if you got any chance, take care........clouds.~

Man!You are a great poet.Loves your work so much and this one was just above them all.Take 5.Jeff

very very well written...like i said before...ur just getting better and better wth each poem...lovely words and a very very touchy...and CUTE poem...take care and 5!

That's very cute and very well written. Keep it up =D

WOW! Amit this is such an amazing poem!! It really did touch my heart. She's SOO lucky to have...tell her that for me!! You did an amazing job and it wouldn't surprise me if your soon to be married!! Just like all your other poems wonderful job!!

~--Sorry I haven't been commenting lately, I apoligize and don't worry it's MY loss. Your poems always bring a smile to my face and help reassure me that once the time comes(I'm still a little yong lol) that I too might find my true love as have you. And be just as happy!! Keep up the fantastic work.

--Christina--

Beautifully done, Amit. 5/5

Love
Heather

aww very adorable:)..i really loved it!! if this is a true proposal, i hope she says yes!!! awesome job, keep it up, love ya, take care~
*Brittany*

Great poem. I like the end. Cute. Keep it up. Red Charm

Good Lord let me just say Congrats because I know this women will say yes..Who wouldn't if words were spoken like that? That made me teary eyed because that was just breath taking! Love your work!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

wonder ful write. u have become my latest favorite, that makes 8! i hope you continue writing and share them with us, they are all so beautiful. stay safe, strong, and healthy!
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ps: thanks for the comment on my I Wish poem!
pss: you asked for my name: kym

Beautifully penned! I really enjoyed reading this! I adored these couplets:

"With the love we share let our hearts beat as one,
let each day be more brighter than the morning sun.

Let me worship you, the Goddess of heavenly grace,
let me hold onto you for ever, in my warm embrace."

Such an enchanting read~Holly

Very good Amit. I enjoyed the second stanza, "make me the owner of unmatchable worth." Excellent description of achieving your true love through such devotion.

Wow, what a beautiful romantic poem. Diction and flow yet again flawless...I fell in love with the words, truely amazing...you have such a wonderful epilitcal style of your own.

I have just finished my latest poem, check it out, its straight from the heart hence its taken me a while he!he!

I wish you all the best!!
Kind regards
Hayley

This is beuatiful and meaningful Amit. Keep writing. 5/5 man