Comments : The Wedding Proposal

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkLaces

    Beautiful!
    Lets Hope She Accepts,
    What A Lucky Lady.

    Failed

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    Thats really lovely Amit, well done once again

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh Amit, how beautiful. If anyone said those words to me, my answer would be, YES!!!!! You do have a loving heart. Good luck. 5/5

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    Amit, that poem touched my heart very much, that lucky girl have your heart and I think its wonderful that she does that you two are so much in love. I do excatly feel the same way for my boyfriend and I hope someday he'll ask me to marry him (Not to soon because i will not accept just yet but he so touches my heart)! Well, good luck and in your words "Always believe in Love" Kristen

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    beautiful written amit...i know how meaning this message.."always believe in love" keep write on amit coz you're one of myfav list...take care,
    -----clouds.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amit, You've taken my breath away, my friend. Such a beautiful and precious poem. Masterpiece, once again. You are truly a romantic with a loving heart. Simply Beautiful. hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    amit myfriend, i know i've read this your work.... and i'm not wanted to comment any...just wanna to tell you.......email me if you got any chance, take care........clouds.~

  • 12 years ago

    by Jeff

    Man!You are a great poet.Loves your work so much and this one was just above them all.Take 5.Jeff

  • 12 years ago

    by Nobia

    very very well written...like i said before...ur just getting better and better wth each poem...lovely words and a very very touchy...and CUTE poem...take care and 5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Nicholle

    That's very cute and very well written. Keep it up =D

  • 12 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    WOW! Amit this is such an amazing poem!! It really did touch my heart. She's SOO lucky to have...tell her that for me!! You did an amazing job and it wouldn't surprise me if your soon to be married!! Just like all your other poems wonderful job!!

    ~--Sorry I haven't been commenting lately, I apoligize and don't worry it's MY loss. Your poems always bring a smile to my face and help reassure me that once the time comes(I'm still a little yong lol) that I too might find my true love as have you. And be just as happy!! Keep up the fantastic work.

    --Christina--

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Beautifully done, Amit. 5/5

    Love
    Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by **Stary_nights**

    aww very adorable:)..i really loved it!! if this is a true proposal, i hope she says yes!!! awesome job, keep it up, love ya, take care~
    *Brittany*

  • 12 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Great poem. I like the end. Cute. Keep it up. Red Charm

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Good Lord let me just say Congrats because I know this women will say yes..Who wouldn't if words were spoken like that? That made me teary eyed because that was just breath taking! Love your work!
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 12 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    wonder ful write. u have become my latest favorite, that makes 8! i hope you continue writing and share them with us, they are all so beautiful. stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    AntiSocial16
    ps: thanks for the comment on my I Wish poem!
    pss: you asked for my name: kym

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Beautifully penned! I really enjoyed reading this! I adored these couplets:

    "With the love we share let our hearts beat as one,
    let each day be more brighter than the morning sun.

    Let me worship you, the Goddess of heavenly grace,
    let me hold onto you for ever, in my warm embrace."

    Such an enchanting read~Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by M J U

    Very good Amit. I enjoyed the second stanza, "make me the owner of unmatchable worth." Excellent description of achieving your true love through such devotion.

  • 12 years ago

    by HJ

    Wow, what a beautiful romantic poem. Diction and flow yet again flawless...I fell in love with the words, truely amazing...you have such a wonderful epilitcal style of your own.

    I have just finished my latest poem, check it out, its straight from the heart hence its taken me a while he!he!

    I wish you all the best!!
    Kind regards
    Hayley

  • 12 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    This is beuatiful and meaningful Amit. Keep writing. 5/5 man