Comments : I can see the pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I waited along time for you to post a new poem. It's was worth the wait. It's different in a good way. I really loved the ending. This poem makes you think! Keep posting I look forward to reading more! Take Care~! Brooke 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Another beautiful write, keep it up.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky drake

    wonderful poem. It does make you think and anytime a writer makes the reader stop, and think about what their reading instead of just hurrying through the lines, its considered an excellant write.........so you did it, I've enjoyed all the poems of your that I'v read so far.....will keep reading. Thanks for sharing. Love ya Becky

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this one a lot. thanks for your lovely comment on my poem.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    great poem like your other poems.
    thanks for your lovely comment.
    much love,
    marjan