Comments : My First Prom...Pt.3

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsea

    I absolutely love this poem. You are a great writer. great job

  • 12 years ago

    by ?

    I'm so sorry that this happened to you, you shouldn't have to go through this, you're such a great person and writer, I wish I could stop this happening, I hope you are helped before it comes to death. This poem was purely beautiful and so heart breaking, loved it, keep it up xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by jescelle

    omg sweetheart i love you so much, this poem made me cry! i can remember my dad saying those things and hurting every part of me.......i love you my darling angel and we will make it through this soon, forever will be wonderful

  • 12 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    I really hope this is a purely fictional story because something this horrible happening to such a caring and compassionate person breaks my heart. This poem brought tears to my eyes...
    Much love,
    -A

  • 12 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That was so strong. It was excellently done but if that is true it is awful that it happened.

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    I am so sorry this happened to you, I would love to fly over and well I cant even say what I would do to that man, you are beautiful, and talented, you have an amazing ability with words, and you show that in your poetry, never let anyone take that away from you, brilliant poem, i hope things can get better for you, well done xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    well theres the third part, so sad though, that prom night had a number of negitive effects, and the prom night is looked to be the one of the best nights of fun in your life. stay strong!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs & love~

  • 12 years ago

    by Lenee.Roca

    that was very extremely good!! it made me cry and think bad to the past when my dad beat me so bad because i cussed at him.. yeah it was like forever ago but i remember it like it was yesterday.. great job though!!
    lenee

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Andrea! I am SO sorry that's happening! I just want to start crying! I wuv you so gosh darn much! This shouldn't be happening to you, and happening at all. Your such a wonderful person, but your parents just don't take the time to see. I want to talk to you SO bad and I miss you SO much! Stay strong Andrea! Things will be okay. Just always remember I'm here and I wuv you to death! <3

    ~Krissy

    *biggest bear hug*

  • 12 years ago

    by Alissa

    wow that was pretty intense you must be a very strong person but please go get help...you shouldnt have to go through this your better then that No one wants this to end badly

  • 12 years ago

    by -nOt*sUrE-

    thats horrible... how could he do that to you?! that makes me cry. im really sorry! is it true?

  • 12 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    omgosh. dang. i wish i could help. i feel so useless. im so sorry you have to go through that. i wish i could get you out of there. man. i am so sorry. be strong ok. i love this poem though. you rite so awsome. you hit it on the dot. awsome job. hope your ok? Much Love

    Nick

  • 12 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    I'm terribly sorry this had to happen to you. Hopefully your father get whats coming to him sooner or later, he deserves worse than hell in my opinion. Just keep staying strong Andrea.

    Jeff

  • 12 years ago

    by Narcissism

    beautiful poem but truly heart breaking
    hope it isnt true

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Andrea, You are so talented. You truly made us readers want to read on for sure. But if this is true and happened to you, I'm so sorry sweetie, my heart goes out to you. But you are a remarkable writer and I truly enjoy your work. Bless you, hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 12 years ago

    by Taylor

    . . . HE SHALL BE BEATEN BY THE MONKEY NUTS WITH THE BAT AND HE SHALL HAVE HIS A.SS KICKED EVERYDAY. . . THEY SHALL SEND HIM TO THE HOSPITAL. . . lol sorry had to say that aww. . . you aren't unbeautiful and broken. . . the monkey nuts think you're beautiful and you are that irresistible that's why the flying sperm always want to get you pregnant hehe. . . well i love this poem like all of yours keep it up! hope it gets better though. . .

    -Big Hairy Monkey Nuts!!!

    Love, Taylor

  • 12 years ago

    by Hillary

    *im really sorry about everything that has happend to you... I really wish that some way i could help you.. keep writting i gave all you prom poems 5's*

  • 12 years ago

    by Fierce

    HOLD UP!!!
    You don't deserve this at all..
    OMG, I can't believe it??
    God has bless you with beauty and no one should tell you otherwise.
    I have seen you picture and you are absolutely gorgeous.
    Just be strong for now and keep looking for the future cause one day you will rise above and show him you are so much better than that!
    Keep the Faith
    Love Sarah

  • 12 years ago

    by L T

    To think, to be a poet's heart.

  • 12 years ago

    by L T

    To think, to be a poet's heart.