Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

unstressed syllables,free endings with a good rhythming.Finally i enjoyed the
Walk :-)

much Respect.
Rua Francis.

Aww. This was so sweet and beautiful! You are such a great writer! ♥

Soo sweet.. Another good one!!

aww omg such a lucky girl!!! great poem!!! truly spectacular!!

aww that was a really sweet poem . . it seems like something my boyfriend would do and say to me. . aww great job

Wow!! You don't know how much I love this poem! It was excellent! I hope you keep writing like this. I look forward to your next piece.
Truly,
Brittany

AWww.That is so cute..I love it..it's a great poem..good write..5/5.....Keep on writin this one made a tear come 2 my eyes..good one..<3 lindsey

wow...i was speechless after i read that...it was one of the best poems i have ever read.

if you get a chance look at my poem "fallen angel" plz.

later

kt

OMG! I really liked.. LOVED this !! You are veryyyyy veryyy good at writing. KEEP IT UP.. To tell you the truth you inspired me.

really great poem. if it was inspired by anyone.....she si a very lucky girl!!

this is a great poem i enjoyed it very much. the girl is very lucky to have someone just like u , keep up the good work and may u always feel as though u r always flyin.<3Zoraida

Aww .. so sweet. I love it! Good job
Take care,
- Shell

Very enchanting poem! So sincerely written....the flow is flawless! Well done, keep it up~Holly

I really enjoyed the peom. Great job it was so amazing.

this poem is really cute =) keep it up
5/5

awe cute!

Amazing

Wow you are a great poet! i think i have read almost all of them by now and i have to say i dont think there is one i dont like!!!
nice job matthew!!!