Oh my word, you have me crying right now. This was written with such emotion and passion! Great job! Keep it up! :-]

WOW!!! that is all I can say.... I am SPEECHLESS!!!
Great job!!

such a sad yet beutiful poem.....your definitly my fav list if not my fav altogether!! once again truly spectacular poem..prue brillent...x) *lisa*

oh wow. . .you are such a great writer that brought tears to my eyes. . .you are very talented and it will get you somewhere. . . great poem. . i really liked it. . if you get a chance check out my 2 favorite poems. . .what i could do with you . . .and. . i wish i was a kid again. . .be sure to comment on them it would really mean alot.

Hey, this really is a beautiful poem. It's so sad. 5/5

~ Tina

OMG! thats so sad! wow, it was really good... *KISSES*~Corrie

Wow this poem touched me to the core.. it is so beautiful yet sad... I adored it although tears fell from my eyes.. your a a great writer... 5555

This is a great poem, keep wrighting
xoxo~whittney

WOW!!!!!!! that is awsome but so sad! I hope this really didnt happen to you and if so i am sorry. this is a really good poem you didnt force the rhyme it flowed together nicely. great job. keep up the good work. Always believe in love and trust in God!!!!!!!!!!!
-Britt

Wow this is the best poem I've ever read!!!

this is realy really really good, sad but good i love it keep it up you are so good at this poetry i would enter a poetry contest if i was you

way to make a person tear up. thats so fricken sad and expertly written. keep it up. i enjoy reading your stuff.
~Freak~

wow that was awsome ...... i dont know wat to say after readin this .... just WOW
grt work
peaceeee

it really gd really sad
luv ells smells XxX
10/10

OMG this poem is so good. that girl kind of reminds me of myself because i have a problem like that

oh my god...that was a very touching poem..it gave me chills and goose bumps the whole way through..keep writing and keep ur head up high...

onelove,
kharisma

IS this a true story? if it is I"m really sorry. this was an excellent poem. I hope to read more poems that you wrote. Check out my poem : She died because of love her heart no one couls save. I think you'll like it. ANd my poem: why do people choose to drink and drive? thanks!
LOve always,
Cristin

This is really good i mean deep the line "she silently dies" OH my god it so good

WOW! YOU BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES GREAT JOB! 5!

Whoa, that was a hella kick @$$ poem,it was sooo sad but it was good...Keep up the good work.

Lots of luv...
~Nicole