wow this is like the best poem that i have ever read, the words are just so powerful. you did an amazing job!!
never ever stop writting.
*~Take Care ~*
<3
-Kit

This is a poem that so many people can relate to, including myself, its got a hopeful yet sad feeling to it, and I really love it! Keep it up xxx

Wow, such a great poem, which everyone has a connection with, I love the fact I can look at your poems and just be spellbound, so beautiful, well done, keep it up

great poem, real emotional. i liked how you did the pause and play, creative idea. you really captured the saddness of the world with this poem.

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs and love~

Andrea, Well written and you did capture the sadness that is truly in this world. Very emotional and sad, but a beautiful job you done. hugs, love, *Ann*

omg great poem i love it but so sad at least there is singing! i wonder if the monkey babies could form a new band called the nutties and nuttettes lol they would rock and they could make everyone smile and take away the bad people and force them to stroke them lovingly lol well keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Beautifully said Andrea. Great job. Everyone can probably relate to this in some way. Keep it up.

Jeff

omgosh. freakin amazing. that was so freakin awsome. i hope that you are doing ok? are you? be strong ok. remember you have to be strong. i totally freakin loved this poem. awsome work

In one world someone is alone.
Their dreams consist of fairy tales
They don’t want to awake to sadness
Or be the person who always quails.

favorite stanza. great job. much Love always

Nick

great job thaat song/poem was awesome

Hey, this is amazing...really creative...good job...keep on writing and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow, that was strong, powerful, and really emotional. Wow. You should be proud of yourself, you're an amazing writer, but I guess you don't need me to tell you that... Anyways, amazing work. Keep it up. Hope everything's alright...
Always, Danielle.

This is an amazing poem - heart felt indeed. I hope everyone in these situations can take a moment, if just to pause, and be eased of a little pain. I for one, did. Well done girl <3

Love yah,
Kal.

Cool. One of your best. It was amazing.

theirs nothing stronger then love girly, and i love you!!!!!!!xoxoxoxoxox
jescelle

Andrea this was beautiful your poems get better and better everytime..i loved this one and the style

Unloved ♥

This is such a meaningful poem, definately one of your best...well one of my favourite anyway. You are such a talented person. Keep them coming.
Love Sarah

Amazing.. It gets one thinking about the world.. Take care (always)

*> : PainOfOne

Wow great poem its so strong and has such a great message def one of your best!

take care

wow that was amazing, i fell in love with that poem, that was just awesome. Keep your head up Andrea, maybe one day we wont have to worry about pain, physical and emotional....
take care,
love ya bo,
-Allen

hey thank you for your comment. i am not cutting, but its getting harder haha. thank you, you are my strength in a way. i can always trust you. your a good friend, thanks. im proud of strong you have been. keep it up. hope your ok? Much Love Always

Nick