Hey....I hope this isn't a true story??? Who would think about suicide at the age of 5?? But great poem adn very sad, so full of emotions!! If this is true, I'm really sorry for your loss, can't imagine how it feels like....Another great poem from you, you just keep writing!!!
I was expecting to read something very long, but this was short and well very sad. The first 2 lines made me want to cry. Well written, but its also dark, sad and very powerful
good write hun
hang in there