Comments : My Dream Boy Doesn't Exist (so sad)

  • 12 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Hey, great poem... I'm sorry for your loss. Hang in there... 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 12 years ago

    by Trisha

    hey! i like this- its good and it rhymes! 5/5 i like it. you should read mine enitled "Cuts and Gashes" thnx

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    a very well written dark poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Well written but very sad. hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    omg that is soooooo sad!

  • 12 years ago

    by Corrie

    Hey good job! And Im really sorry if that really happened! Put your trust in God, He will always take care of you! *HUGZ*~Corrie

  • 12 years ago

    by NoPatience

    5/5 great poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    I think you need to expand on why this boy meant so much to you so we can feel as you do. Don't take for granted that we will feel like you you need to show the us how and why...

  • 12 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hey....I hope this isn't a true story??? Who would think about suicide at the age of 5?? But great poem adn very sad, so full of emotions!! If this is true, I'm really sorry for your loss, can't imagine how it feels like....Another great poem from you, you just keep writing!!!

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 12 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    This poem was great! Sure, I'll try to help your friend. Is it in english? I'll do anything I can, you can send me an email too if you want to =)
    Satuxxa

  • 12 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    this was really good, so much emotion going on and you wrote 2 stanzas..nice

    Unloved ♥

  • 12 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    How sad:) Im sorry about your dream boy... When I read it, i felt a tear fall down from my eye... 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by **~xoxo~**

    That was a really sad poem... Keep up the good work.... and im sorry about your lose of your dream boy... That is really sad on how someone could even think about suicide at age 5... Keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    NIce poem! 5.0 plz comment and vote on sum of my poems! plz and thanx ♥

  • 12 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    I was expecting to read something very long, but this was short and well very sad. The first 2 lines made me want to cry. Well written, but its also dark, sad and very powerful
    good write hun
    hang in there

  • 12 years ago

    by lindzy

    I kind of understand what your going threw, just last month i lost my best friend who also commited suicide! if u ever need to talk my email addy is monkies_are_the_future@hotmail.com
    ~*lindz*~

  • How Beautiful 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey this is sad...keep ur head up and take care..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 12 years ago

    by rachel

    wow, i reli love this its so powerful with so few words 5/5 stay strong and keep writin xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by SuicidePrincess

    great poem i loved how it flowed hope its not a true story it very sad dont worry about reading any of mu poem or anything they all suck

    5/5