Hey, great poem... I'm sorry for your loss. Hang in there... 5/5

~ Tina

hey! i like this- its good and it rhymes! 5/5 i like it. you should read mine enitled "Cuts and Gashes" thnx

a very well written dark poem

Well written but very sad. hugs, love, *Ann*

omg that is soooooo sad!

Hey good job! And Im really sorry if that really happened! Put your trust in God, He will always take care of you! *HUGZ*~Corrie

5/5 great poem

I think you need to expand on why this boy meant so much to you so we can feel as you do. Don't take for granted that we will feel like you you need to show the us how and why...

Hey....I hope this isn't a true story??? Who would think about suicide at the age of 5?? But great poem adn very sad, so full of emotions!! If this is true, I'm really sorry for your loss, can't imagine how it feels like....Another great poem from you, you just keep writing!!!

*Hugs Sabrina*

This poem was great! Sure, I'll try to help your friend. Is it in english? I'll do anything I can, you can send me an email too if you want to =)
Satuxxa

this was really good, so much emotion going on and you wrote 2 stanzas..nice

Unloved ♥

How sad:) Im sorry about your dream boy... When I read it, i felt a tear fall down from my eye... 5/5

That was a really sad poem... Keep up the good work.... and im sorry about your lose of your dream boy... That is really sad on how someone could even think about suicide at age 5... Keep writing

NIce poem! 5.0 plz comment and vote on sum of my poems! plz and thanx ♥

I was expecting to read something very long, but this was short and well very sad. The first 2 lines made me want to cry. Well written, but its also dark, sad and very powerful
good write hun
hang in there

I kind of understand what your going threw, just last month i lost my best friend who also commited suicide! if u ever need to talk my email addy is monkies_are_the_future@hotmail.com
~*lindz*~

How Beautiful 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Hey this is sad...keep ur head up and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

wow, i reli love this its so powerful with so few words 5/5 stay strong and keep writin xxx

great poem i loved how it flowed hope its not a true story it very sad dont worry about reading any of mu poem or anything they all suck

5/5