Wow very emotion. I love it

Morana

good job, i liked this poem, keep up the great work, please comment and rate my 2 latests poems "so much more" and "so far apart"

thats very good. i feel it was rushed just a little bit though. towards the end like you ran out of lines so you just ended it before its time. but i felt the emotion very strongly so that kinda makes up for it.5/5
~Freak~

Wow nada!!! Your really good!!! Keep it up!!

Oops... Miss Vicious!!! sorry!!!
*backs away embarrased*

Oops... Miss Vicious!!! sorry!!!
*backs away embarrased*

Oops... Miss Vicious!!! sorry!!!
*backs away embarrased*

Good poem but it really is sad that someone thinks of suicide at the age of 5? Well i'm sorry if it is true but wonderful poem honey!

I messed up your name... so i corrected my self... and i was embarrassed... sorry!!

excellent job!

~Hina

Im not the best poet so I guess im not the best to judge either but in my opinion I belive it had about of feeling the only thing that was hard for me was to figure out who the boy was none the less this poem had emotion in what every great poem is full of So 5/5

you seem to have a bad thing with co dependance issues. The work is ok but I really think you need to expand your horizons abit. Dark and sad envoke alot of emotions strong but to see life for what it is I think you may need to open up to the beauty around you its hard but its there open your eyes and look around...

Wow I'm sorry that happened

aww at 5? omg that is so sad, and very good poem

heart touching poem once again....you sure are a good poet...keep up the great work...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

The scheme of it is very engaging. Well done.

hey, this is so great and so sad.
you write so well.
much love, Marjan

wow. that poem flows sooo well!! i really enjoyed reading it! great job!! 5/5
love always,
ABcede

this is short but so moving. keep writing, ur really talented!

yeh this is really sad good poem 5/5