Really Good!!! SOOO much emotion involved... I love when I read a poem, and can feel how the author might have felt!!!
Keep it Up!!

Great poem. Can kinda relate to it in my own little way:)

So full of true feelings. I have had that happen to me too! It takes time to get over and they just go on their way. Nice job on showing your feelings. I still don't have any new poems lol. Take Care~! Brooke

hey lots of emotion and i think every1 can relate 2 this . well written and the rhyme works well. 5/5 xxx

I liked this poem, it's exactly how i feel! i just have a small suggestion,
with this line
*There was noting to do
Darling I loved you so*
i think you should take away the so...because it breaks the flow.....but great poem otherwise

*x*Tash*x*

i know the feeling. @zzhole men. bugger em all. good poem i like the flow.
~Freak~

Wow. This is a beautiful poem. A lot of emotion and hurt. I love it. Great job and keep it up.

Love,
Tiff

I too have felt the sting of love. I could feel the emotions behind this piece. So full of love, hate, anger, hurt, betryal all wrapped in one. Very nice and written wonderfully.

--Sher

That is so strong...good job...

Cool rhyming scheme too...

i'll read a few more

Such a strong, wonderful poem full of talent! I can't just change my name because they will guess it's me because they will know it's me, my best friend is Jade, I am 20, I am in the uk. They would click on easily. Oh well they wouldn't stumble across the new account and know it was me because nobody calls me that. Anyway
Great poem once again hun :)

well done hun. xxxx

wow that was a great poem, i know exactly how u feel, i think that happens 2 everyone at least once, well keep up the great work, please rate and comment my latest "together again" thanks

Very well done, brilliantly expressed and powerfully conveyed.

Wow such nice emotions put behind it! I loved it...... and i could relate to what you were saying!