Theme is very good and interesting. i wouldn't say you've written it badly but i think it could have been better. vocab could have been stronger. just my thought... as a whole it's a nice one... good to read... keep writing.
Great use of words, reminded me of what i wrote in the past... 2 years i've felt that way with that girl, then i was rejected before i even confessed. Before she left i gave her a compiled book of all my poems that i wrote for her, which was at that time all i had... (and deleted the soft copy, so only she had it, sorry guys/girls) whatever i post are the new ones. Back to topic, great work and keep the pen moving.
I think its safe to say that almost everyone has felt this way. In a few short stanza's you caught one of lifes most questioned troubles. Its elequently written and evokes a real sense of compassion and understanding. Great job! 5/5!