this is a great poem! I liked it a lot u didnt forsce the rhyme in it you just let the words flow willingly. I hope this didnt happen to you and if so i am srry and hope u r ok. keep up the good work. Alwasy believe in love and trust in God!!!!!!!
When I read your poem I couldn't help
but tear:( Is this story true if I may ask? I'm in the situation with all what you said the same except, we both are still best friends than ever, but yeah he asked me out last year and wev'e become so close, after nine years I never knew it would come true!!! I Love Him So Much and I just want to let you know that I love your poem:)
This is the best poem I Have read on this website altogether....You really know how to get people into the things you are writing....Your talent for writing is wonderful and you should keep on writing for what comes from your heart could affect the hearts of millions....That poem was awsome...You made me feel like I knew the people you had involved....I loved it.Keep it up!!!
yo ur work is good, i really liked this 1 , because i was in a situation were this guy liked me n i liked him 2 but i never told, him n he thought i was playing wit him, then he died in all of my fellings were captured inside, so i can relate.