The person inside

by BloodScars   May 7, 2005


I cant take they person
thats inside me
i don't want to be the little girl
that everyone seems to see

I'm the little quiet one
sitting on the sidelines
not wanting to do anything
to make attention signs

i stand off to the sides
and let everyone walk on by
to make them think
I'm not the type to cry

i believe that I'm a failure
I'm not worth anything
i cant stand who i am today
hoping I'll never make it to spring

as i try harder today
to make my life end
i do more than cutting
now more than ever i need a true friend

as the signs go up
and i wanna take my life more
they walk on bye
as like I'm an invisible snore

as my shyness is
and temper goes
i cant sleep at night
as my crying shows

as the jasmine sets
into my bloody scars
and the wax drys
just hope i can restore whats ours

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Powerful poem. I can really relate to that and the imagery of the street you have used fits it perfectly.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Hey I really liked this poem, kinda relates to me but yea i liked it, it was really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fade_t0_bLaCk

    I really like your poem. It's sad but it's sabout something true. Good job.
    Sydni

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    It's so upsetting - made me cry but it is a great way to let your feelings out, through poetry. It always helps me. The poem is great and keep that chin up. I'm sure it will be alright :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I cant take they person
    should it be the? But good poem, I enjoyed it. keep up the good work!:)

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