i really like this one. and i know how you feel. great writting. keep it up!
crystal

I cant take they person
should it be the? But good poem, I enjoyed it. keep up the good work!:)

It's so upsetting - made me cry but it is a great way to let your feelings out, through poetry. It always helps me. The poem is great and keep that chin up. I'm sure it will be alright :)

I really like your poem. It's sad but it's sabout something true. Good job.
Sydni

Hey I really liked this poem, kinda relates to me but yea i liked it, it was really good.

Powerful poem. I can really relate to that and the imagery of the street you have used fits it perfectly.

Peace. [Sole]