Comments : Stripper

  • 18 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    An immediate 5~
    Your grim and gore have collided to form this morbid satire of shame and truth.

  • 18 years ago

    by tyra

    understood very well put

  • 18 years ago

    by tyra

    understood very well put

  • 18 years ago

    by tyra

    understood very well put

  • 18 years ago

    by tyra

    understood very well put

  • 18 years ago

    by tyra

    understood very well put

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    freakishly good. lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by Künstliche Welten

    "a precision in her placement
    like a parody of surgery"

    oh... that line was a punch in the gut. i've probably used that phrase before. but it's all i can think of to describe it. peace love & hippies.

  • Wow incredible !!! It's so different to other poems i've read 5/5 definately !!!

    xxx ~*~ Charli

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Beautfily written..5 Keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    Brilliant again! Gruesomely surreal yet the metaphors of your images are so true to life at the same time.

    Very captivating.