When i commit my suicide

by Joann   May 13, 2005


When i commit my suicide
I'll shoot right at this heart
because its already broken
and torn all apart

when i commit my suicide
I'll leave this note for you
and you'll wonder why i did it
then you wont know what to do

when i commit my suicide
my tears will be long gone
I'll finally leave this misery
I'll finally feel strong

when i commit my suicide
I'll be glad that we're apart
I'll be done with all the pain
you caused me from the start...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    REALLLLLLLY NICE POEM!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    REALLLLLLLY NICE POEM!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!

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    by Razorblade_romance666

    wow that is very good i wrote a poem like that can you check out some of my poems my screen name is Dark Angel so check out some of my poems please and comment them thanx...