Great poem...keep up the good work, I loved it.

good work...i hope i can do dat long poem of urs: )

amazing makes me want to get kissed and yes sadly i havent ever been kissed

Beautifuly Written 5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

The last line was very beautiful about the unread fairytale. Wonderful. This was one poem I must say I really enjoyed....and I don't have any critique. Keep writing, very nice write.
Satuxxa

omg.. tis was really breathtaking. i loved it. no joke. you have a lot of talent. keep it up

nice poem

great job! very detailed! keep it up! 5/5

very beautiful! great job! u are talented! 5/5