Comments : I want to move on!

  • 18 years ago

    by *-*InLove:-)*-*

    Hey this is really good. I knoe exactly how u feel... i ahve been in the same situation befor. it hurts. but u will get threw. keep on writting ur great at it! Comment n rate mine to please

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I know it's hard to move on sometimes. It's hard to just put them in the past and never look back. Very well expressed! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    hey this was really good 5/5 just hang on and keep writing
    *gumdrop*

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Brilliant. You have very strong messages in your poems...showing them through personal experience is a great way to go. This poem holds so much truth, I definitely relate. Oh, and great rhyming.

    Thanks.
    xxx