This is really good!! I have a friend that is 14 and she has a little boy and her boyfriend left her to! I feel sorry for all the young mothers that this happens to, but respect them because they take care of there kids. Even thou they had kids young they still love 'em with all there heart and wouldnt trade them for the world.
5/5 great job!!
Great poem. Some of my friends have gotten pregnet as you as 12-13, and just threw seeing them, I know that is it hard, but worst it when all is said and done. This poem shows that, and just like the ather some have done the same to them. So great job, your poem may help more people than you know.
This poem was really good.. I have never had this experence because as you can tell i'm still VERY young.. but i have had the same thign happen to them when there boyfriends leave them. its be hard for them and i watch them everyday go through the same thing. But it was really good 5/5!! keep it up
WoW...that was a wonderful poem...it must have been hard for you to do that...Good for You making it through those hard times and keeping your baby...If you wanna chat send me a E-Mail @
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girl! im glad i never made da one night stand this guy wanted me to do wit him i never did i aint like dat but i was always scared of that and im sry bout u n yo x man dats wut makes u strong girl keep it up !
I too was 14 when i got pregnant i had a little boy too i am now 16 and he is 11 months old i too would change nothing his father is not here either it is good to know that i am not the only one this has happened to i feel worn and old but thanx for posting the poem it was great
I just have to say, that was an awesome poem. it really touched me. i can kinda relate. im 16 my boyfriend is 16. we havent been together for a long time or anything but, now im pregnate. i just wish it was easy. but i know it will be hard. he says he will stay by my side but, reading your poem makes me think. youre an awesome writer. if there is any way for you to contact me, i really wish u would. id love to talk to you. it would be nice to have some one who can relate to what im sayin. email me... firstname.lastname@example.org
WOW! great poem! i was not as young i was 18 and i hid the pregnancy until my eigth month, i had a girl and her dad left us, we are better off without him, hes a very selfish person anyone that could not be in there childs life is! 5! please read my new poem MY HUGE SIN it would be greatly appreciated.
If you ever need some comfort that you did the right thing read my poem - bring my baby home - I envy you and the choices you made - I wish i was that strong when I was younger - I have a little girl now, I am blessed, but it never goes away. Good poem.