*Claps hands* Lovely poem my dear.

wow, u really now how to write a dark poem well done! xox sam

wow that was awesome, i love dark poetry and you are good at it! thanks for commenting on my poem!

Fabulous, I easily imagined you standing before a crowd delivering this peice!
The flow and the language, rent with such emotion given forthwith in each line and image, were marvelous.
"Screaming murder and betrayal I here there pain
I am there savor
I am at home
I am at peace"
I really admired these lines~naming just a few.
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And I greatly appreciated your comments in kind.

Incrediable! I really loved the story, the imagery, all of it. If you can double check spelling, it would be PERFECT! KEEP IT UP!
luv kt

Great poem! 5/5 it had something that just... that just made it like no poem I ever read... & I mean that in a good way

I dont usualy like to do this, because i hate when its done to me, but theres really alot of spelling mistakes in here... you should put your poems through a spell checker before you submit them, it would make them alot better