Comments : Falling Down

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    love the last two lines and first two lines (since they are the same) but they are so cool together! this is a really cool poem, of what seems to be about how people believe things and then are surprised about stuff in live, how they can seem blinded. wonderful job! loved it.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~