This Is Your Conscience

by †JustAri†   May 17, 2005


Loss of hope crinkles the corners of your eyes
The jar that holds your tears is ready to shatter inside your head
You fight to hold them back
But it's useless, like trying to stop a tidal wave by pushing it away

Your throat is so sore from screaming in pain
You're coughing up blood, some of it from your broken heart
Your whole world is falling apart
Don't ever forget the pain that love has brought you

I'm your conscience, I can't hold you
I remember I tried to tell you to be careful what you do
Because I deal with your pain, too

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    *opens case* langth doesn't matter missy! lol your poem is better than mine, any ways yours still has a 5.0 rating, last i knew mine doesn't! so by the power invested in my and my evidence this case is now closed and the verdict is this poem is better! *closes case*

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love from the bottom of my heart~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    that was awesome! love how you ended it! i give you credit. it's like having a battle with yourself, it's always intresting, i battle myself alot too, i kinda have a poem like this, "The Battle Within" they're kinda the same. hey have you noticed i am really close to have read all your poems! you're just so awesome and i'm hooked on your words lol. i can't explain how i love reading your comments! and the 9/11 poem ya i was sitting at home and i was like i feel like writing and for some odd reason the idea came to me, because what if that was your first day working there, ever, it's just so sad. i remember that day at school and home, how horrible it was just watching the news, and our teachers told us nothing about it. i didn't actually know what happend until i came home and i couldn't believe it when i watched the videos and stuff. well ne ways great poem! loved it!

    ~PLP~ lots of hugs and love from the bottom of my heart~

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    wow...beautiful!!!! very dark... love it! keep it up!
    Ariane
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Thanx Elizabeth & Kalah! I appreciate it lots! Well, i guess i'm turnin n 4 2nite...PEACE 2 ALL OF Y'ALL AND G'NITE

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Woah hun <3. Nice write. People conscience effects them like a living person does. // Great stuff :P I like your poetry, you are deffinatley one for my favourites.

    Love,
    Kalah.

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