i really like this poem! its like i can relate to it exactly...very nice job of putting all the words togather in just the right places!!

So sad! I have to add you to my favorites! Your poems are so very well written and always filled with true feelings! I noticed your picture on your profile you look a lot like my brother. Well anyways another amazing poem! Take Care! 5/5 Brooke~

It was so good! You really have a talent, I hope to see some new poems from you soon!

That was so sad. I can relate. Love can really suck. I'll rate this a 5/5. Keep writing and stay strong.

-Ice

Im going to cry...I understand the feelings in this poem. It is probably the best poem I have read from you yet. Keep up the good work!

This poem is so sad and i can relate to it totally. I loved it keep writing.
Love Kate x~x~x

You've really got a talent for this...super job with the poem, i love it...

"Tonight my tears are for you,
With every drop a memory is lost.
I'll drown myself in a
Pool of times we had together."

^That's one of my favorite parts, but it's all full of comparisons and the phrasing is just great... :)

Thank you for the comments. I appreciate it.

xxx

aww so very sad....im soo sorry you feel this way...but you did a great job at sharing what you feel....i felt the pain...lol..anyways...very well written nice job...luv yas mwah'

-kayla-

strong emotion, sad, kinda lonely feeling

Aww that was really sad. IT was really good though. It sounded like it really came from the heart.

Aww! Darien! That's really good 4 your first poe, I have to both get a hold of my digital camera and get my internet up and running and then we are in business, It ttyl! But that was a good one!

Wow, This reminds me of my mum. Really good poem. I can't pick a fav stanza, Cause I loved them all. Really awesome job! And thanks for being so honest in the comment. =] 5/5

`taleee xx

So sweet.. i could have cried, i got into the first 2 paragraphs and i was nearly blinking back tears..

you have a knack for good poetry