Easy come, hard to go.

by Mel   May 17, 2005


Before love came along
I bathed in the warmth
of the summer sun:
Childish
innocent
forever young

When love arrived
I sang to the night
caught by the gravity of the moon:
An adult
tarnished
and pretty soon

Love departed
and then there was no sun
and then there was no moon
just pieces
broken
too much
too soon.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Shows that you can capture the essence and deepness with few words. Great write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Very well written... a pleasure to read.

    Great job....

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I love the trinity idea you have used, so true, sad and beautiful. Amazing write, and the same of all your poems.
    Thank you for your comment on my poem, it means a lot.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Aleesha

    Hey Mel. Great poem really sweet but sad at the same time luv leesh xo

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    Thanks 4 commenting on my poems. it means a lot 2 me. so thanks. once again i must say that this poem it just totally.......... perfect

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