This is such a beautiful piece, written extremely well. You have picked perfect words, good vocabulary, nice rhymes. Everything you have put in this master piece is just fabulous, I wouldn't write it any better.
I seriously think you should submit that into a contest or something because that is unbelievable.
You seem like a great person and I would love to get to know you more
Heyy!!! That is one of the BEST poems i have read from a guy. You know, its REALLY hard to find a b/f just because not a lot of people have those qualities. Heck, a lot of people dont even care about most of those things. If you really are like that, i would love to talk to you. My e-mail is firstname.lastname@example.org......or......my myspace is, www.myspace.com/brandyrocs. I hope to hear from you soon! :)