Comments : Goodbye for now, but not forever

  • 18 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    This poem is really good and expresses so much. Great job. Hope to see some more poems from you.
    Luv Alwayz,
    Katie Schettler

  • 18 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Wow, This is an amazing poem. I really enjoyed reading it, you have beautiful talent. Great job.
    Take care always,
    - Shell.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    OMG! This is truly a wonderful write. Very sad and moving. I felt every heartache and the tears just flowed through. I can honestly say that I was moved into another world while reading this.

    Excellent job I do not think that 5 is a high enough rating.

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That was just beautifully written! It was so sad and filled with so much emotion. One of the best poems I have read in along time! You did an amazing job! 5/5 Thanx so much for your comments on mine it meant a lot! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    So beautiful and sad at the same time, this poem really made me cry ='0( You really did a great job with this poem, it's amazing, excellent and just perfect....If I could I would give it so much more than 5...

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Bonnie Fowler

    It is sooooo sad. But it is a wonderful poem also. I enjoyed reading it. keep writing. Good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bizarre

    Awesome poem. You're a good writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by NoPatience

    wow this is so sad. it made me cry. really. amazing job it flowed really well 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hoover

    That is a really good poem!, and i'm glad to see that you back to writing, i was wondering when i was going to get a chance to read some of your great stuff, and you other poem was good too, but i thought i just comment on this one cuz this one is my favorite out of the two. Keep up the good work, and i'll keep looking forword to reading them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Madga

    Wow. I am completely at lost with words. This was beautiful, and extremely sad. This one almost made my eyes get teary, which is rare. Great job. Keep it up.

    Lina

  • 18 years ago

    by killix

    wow....reading this poem really made me feel hurt inside. its a lovely poem please keep writing I'll be very happy to read more of your work

  • 18 years ago

    by deep n life

    Excellent poem Excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by happy days

    im speechless.... that was one of teh best poems ive ever read, it was so beautiful yet so sad, if i could vote higher than a 5/5 i wud! looking forward to reading more of ur work xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleed-Like-Me

    wow that was such a powerful piece, it even almost made me cry, very good writing, im so sorry if it is true, wow

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    wow, that was an amazing poem. my heart broke! lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by ChaoticSchemer

    That poem was very strong and heartfelt... im sorry for your loss... it seems it only happens to the best of us these days... keep your head up and be strong
    Keep smiling
    Katie

  • 18 years ago

    by SeXiSaMi

    wow! i really loved that poem obe of the best i have read in awhile! it just made me think and want to cry! keep up the great work! 5/5
    ~SaMi~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ria

    Agapi this was heavenly, I admire you too! Very emotional, I got nothing else to say, it took me away, I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by krystal

    i loved this poem it reminds me of my brother we said goodbye i couldnt stop crying he said those exact words goodbye for now but it wont be forever

    it also reminds me of my cuzins husband....

  • 18 years ago

    by deathsXchild

    wow im so sorry i wouldnt know what to do if that ever happened to me!