Your poem is really good and I give you all the luck in the world. I know how it is, I've been there before.
Even though i don't know you, but here's what I have to say:
I think that you should keep it, cause it' ll be your pride and joy. I know cause I lost my kid before I had it and it really does hurt when you know that you lost somehing that was a part of you. Again I give you all the luck in the world

Excellent poem...word of advice I am now 27 thank you for reading and commenting on mine...but I went back to my x that I spoke about in my poem we had another child at 18 and 19 We then were married and I had to repeat everthing again..my advice move on do not waste your time waiting for someone to see your true beauty..I move on and am now married to the man of my dreams we have 2 children together as well and he treats my first 2 as his own the grass can sometimes be greener on the other side...we dont intend to take these paths in life because we all want to be happy but if you feel that this will be a forever thing move on...you can do it be strong

Very open and personal, no doubt. Lots to consider and hope (if it is real) that your decision also comes from your heart, as do your words.

wow!!! what a great poem lots of luv to ya girl and keep witting....

luv
~nova~

oh my hunn...i am so sry that johnathon has to be like that. no one deserves that.

another great poem. 5/5

Your poem is really touching. May God help you with your decision. I'm an adopted child and I don't even know my birth mother. I wish I did.