Lost Inside A Wish

by †JustAri†   May 19, 2005


Nothing I say makes this any better
Even if I said a word, it would be at the wrong time
All that I do, and no matter how hard I try
None of this makes anything alright

Wishing does nothing, after all, they're only wishes
Dreams are fake images rolling through my head
Of who I hope to be, and how I need to get there
Right now, my dreams are nightmares instead

*Not one of my best, but it represents a desparate period of my life not too long ago. Please help me with the title!!!*

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Thanks, guys, I FINALLY FIGURED OUT A TITLE 2DAY!!!
    PEACE MUCH LUV TAKE CARE
    //Ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    maybe the title can be "Wishes and Dreams" just an idea. great poem! really captured my attention.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 18 years ago

    by Hether

    How about "Nothing but wishing for dreams" for a title????
    Heather