That's so sad. Very well written the flow was great. I hope you are not really thinking about this. You are very talented. 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~

this was exquisite i really enjoyed reading it, you're talented.
~Freak~

gr8 poem...u took tha words outta me...u just described everything 4 me...thats a gr8 poem n i no how u r feelin take care

wow..i dont know what to see... that was so sad but amazingly well written,. def 5/5 take care and keep wrting cos u hav alot of talent xxxx

I LOVE IT, amazingly written, very touching and heartbreaking!!! I really felt your pain in this one, I totally relate. Well done and the flow and rhyme was just perfect...Keep up the good work!!!

*Hugs Sabrina*

wow. powerful, very good. great write.

I think your poem is very good and very true to some....Keep writing and never give up...Just remember life is to short to quite...cuz you never know you might just win!

great poem Tina!! I voted a 5.. keep up the good work... please read my poem "A thousand tears for dad" please comment and vote..! thanks a lot.. hugs

wow exceletny poem so deep and its so sad. you cna feel the pain.

love it

Jacs
xxx

GREAT JOB!!!I like it..