The Shower of Love

by Prince Enigma   May 20, 2005


I been waiting my entire life,
For this moment with my darling wife,
As I dropped rose petals on the floor,
Making a rosy path to the bathroom door,
To finally prepare for a night to remember,
On our anniversary month of November.

Mesmerized by the beautiful scent,
As she entered the household,
Quickly my hands cover her eyes,
Gently putting on a blindfold.

Whispering into her ear,
"Don't worry its me",
As I lead her toward the bathroom,
And let her free.

Her arms and hands let loose,
She attacked me like a wild amazon,
Fiercely, tearing of all our clothes,
I had to turn the shower on.

Staring with utmost devotion,
We hold each other under the shower,
With arms around each other,
We prepare for our love hour.

Like a fantasy cascade,
Like a flowing waterfall,
Drops of tears coming from above,
Drops of water pouring from a rainfall.

My two hands entice her face,
Pulling hers closer to mine,
As we kiss under the shower,
Our lips intertwine.

The kiss seemed to last forever,
As our lips finally depart,
Her eyes slowly open,
As this was only the start.

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  • 18 years ago

    by baby.bluestar

    raunchy

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    really good! keep it up!

    ~*Ashli*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Beautiful... utterly beautiful. It's a sweet poem, definetely.
    You started off a little shaky, I didn't like the wording of your first line.. but then the spiritual and emotional feelings really made this piece worthy.
    You write with such devotion; a true romantic piece.
    Well done, it definetely held a 'sexy' attitude ;).

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Hey this is really good...keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by crissy abalos

    nice poem u captured me by the words u used:)