Aww Thats So Sad! But Good Job 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

that is really good...really intense...lots of emotion..5/5 really great poem...i hope some of the pain he caused can be healed...keep up writing

*talks through teeth* i hate bastards like your father.....*hiss* may i kill him FOR you? i would be happy to.
great poem. very powerful and sad.
~*Freak*~

thanx no dun kill him...hes not in my life nemore

intense way of describing your feelings.. I'm s0rry ab0ut what happened..
Keep up your talent..
*hugs* PunkChick

I Cherish The Way You Write, No Wonder Your On My Favorites 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Thanks Nikki, you're on my faves too. Thanks everyone, i appreciate everyone of them. You're all in my prayers. XXXXX
JL