This is very weel written peice, very strong

Thanx for the comment, i loved your poem, it was strong!!

Hey I really like this poem. I can really relate to it. It comes off really strong but in a good way. Nice goin. Keep it up! 5/5

Very fluent and nice use of enjambement. i think this poem was absolutely bursting with emotion and it was so easy to read it just flowed, well done

This poem was filled with a lot of emotions and its pretty much what everyone goes though in puberty and it sucks im so glad those years are over, another wonderful poem, keep up the writting you are very good

I like it. Some adjustment to the arrangement to give it a sound and it would be fan tic emo! You got serious potential luv.