aw this poem is so sad! i love it tho! good job! check out sum of mine plz..* 5/5....*

Awsome poem man....your a gr8 poet and have a lot of potential...look 4ward to readin the rest of ur poems..
From Me

it made me want to cry i can relate to this kinda but a boy not a girl awsome

KM

You rhyme things so well!

Super good poem
i love the emotion u show

The title is what first drew me in. Your words are beautiful, and the imagery is beautiful but sad.