Comments : Not The Average Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by Forever29

    Such a strong poem! It's clear to see that you march to the beat of your own drum! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by M J U

    Amanda......this is fabulous. To use the old cliche, "where have you been all my life?" Your writing contiunues to wow me more and more. Truthfully and with all sincerity, of everyone I read on this great sight, you remain and will always be my favorite. Your writing just meets me and greets me the way poetry should. Now, for the real deal......thank you for my "Inspiration" and thinking enough to write that poem. It is beautiful and coniderate that you should go to such effort. With the exception of a couple for "roses are red"poems from neices and nephews, this is the first poem I've ever received that didn't say Hallmark or American Greetings on it. Thank you and you too, are a terrific person and friend.

  • 18 years ago

    by meredith

    great job! thanks for the comment on mine too. this one is great, i really love it!
    peace~love
    mer

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "While some girls want diamonds rings
    And are able to talk on the phone for hours
    I’m satisfied with the simple things
    Just give me a handful of wild flowers"

    love that part! this is such a great poem, and i agree with most of what you said, it's better to be a one of a kind in stead of a copy of the world, great message!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ thanks for your comment~

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey it's a well written piece - be very proud! Have you thought of getting one published? Hey this poem is brilliant. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda, As Meena said be proud of who you are, and you sound like a woman that has it all together and a very special person. Great job, truly loved this one alot. hugs, love, *Ann*

  • 18 years ago

    by AlwaysBeThinkingOfYou

    wonderful poem i have a friend at school that could probably relate to this poem great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    i lvoe it i've neevr read anything like it 5/5/ love sam xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Fierce

    OMG!!!!!! SO powerful, Im so glad that someone can finally write about his sort of stuff. I am so over reading and writing depressing poems! Thanks so much for giving me inspiration!
    Love Sarah
    Xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by lindzy

    awwwww wow i love this poem its sooooooo good! 5/5
    ~*lindz*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholle

    great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    This is my favorite poem of all times....how inspiring and beautiful! I'm speechless, no words to to say....

  • 18 years ago

    by Tasha

    Wow, great poem. It's really good. (=

  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Totally relate don't you just hate when people are like oh your a girl if i want to talk i'll call or you're a girl you should just be quite and look cute
    love this poem totally shows the reall you
    just remember *as you have so far* just be yourself