Comments : Deadly love

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    wow, powerful poem, creepy, well done, keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    I agree with Katie. Excellet excellent write. I really enjoyed it. <3333

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a very dark poem but I ca't understand if you welcome the darkness or fear it on the boarder of it you never leaned either way. If you could gaze at my work it would mean alot to me thanks please comment and vote too...

  • 12 years ago

    by Loves poison

    Robert, u don't under stand what this poem means... This was a really good peom with lots of sorrow and madness keep on writing these types of poems you have talent
    If you want we can talk on chat later today
    Once agian awsome effert

    Shyla

  • 12 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    OMG I love this. Its very unique.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dangerous Angels

    That was really deep. It seems like u put alot of feeling into this poem. And no matter how it turns out in the end, the feelings of the poem makes it the best. I especially liked the last part of it. Usually when if I make them long like that I begin to fall towards the end. But u stuck to it and put great effort into it. Great job! Keep it up. ANd maybe u can look at some of my past poems when I was depressed.

  • 12 years ago

    by CorruptedDreamer

    i really really like this poem a lot
    Corr^pt'dDr_mer

  • 12 years ago

    by [She.Falls.Asleep]

    Wow. This poems so powerful, and it leaves you with a buzz after you've read it. It's a great poem! 5. Take care, Elle x

  • 12 years ago

    by Justin

    AWESOME POEM!!! REALLY DEEP, AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! (ANOTHER JESS)
    ~Jess~

  • 12 years ago

    by XxCrimsonxSinxX

    I liked the poem lots!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the good work n do me a favor n read some of my stuff n tell me what u think, c'ya