wow, powerful poem, creepy, well done, keep it up

I agree with Katie. Excellet excellent write. I really enjoyed it. <3333

This was a very dark poem but I ca't understand if you welcome the darkness or fear it on the boarder of it you never leaned either way. If you could gaze at my work it would mean alot to me thanks please comment and vote too...

Robert, u don't under stand what this poem means... This was a really good peom with lots of sorrow and madness keep on writing these types of poems you have talent
If you want we can talk on chat later today
Once agian awsome effert

Shyla

OMG I love this. Its very unique.

That was really deep. It seems like u put alot of feeling into this poem. And no matter how it turns out in the end, the feelings of the poem makes it the best. I especially liked the last part of it. Usually when if I make them long like that I begin to fall towards the end. But u stuck to it and put great effort into it. Great job! Keep it up. ANd maybe u can look at some of my past poems when I was depressed.

i really really like this poem a lot
Corr^pt'dDr_mer

Wow. This poems so powerful, and it leaves you with a buzz after you've read it. It's a great poem! 5. Take care, Elle x

AWESOME POEM!!! REALLY DEEP, AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! (ANOTHER JESS)
~Jess~

I liked the poem lots!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the good work n do me a favor n read some of my stuff n tell me what u think, c'ya