You hate me, I love you.

by Stacinator   May 22, 2005


Everything was perfect,
And nothing went wrong.
Our love was amazing,
And we usually got along.

Those little fights were nothing,
At least nothing compared to now.
I broke your heart and I was stupid,
I'd do anything to get you back somehow.

Because of what happened,
It's me you hate.
I hurt inside too,
And I regret this mistake.

Another chance for "us,"
Is way out of the question.
And to just be friends?
That I won't mention.

What brought us together,
Was what ripped us apart.
Our different point of views,
And our opposite sized hearts.

I thought I could move on,
But I'm just not ready.
The memories are fresh,
And makes my head really heavy.

If we were together,
I wouldn't let go.
You were the only one for me,
Until I let go.

I can't forget you,
And I never will.
Our relationship was rocky,
But I surely loved the thrill.

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  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    Another great poem! i really liked it!
    the only thing was this line..

    "If we were together,
    I wouldn't let go.
    You were the only one for me,
    Until I let go."
    maybe if you could find a different rhyme instead of using let go twice...

    but it's still a great poem! 5/5
    take care, xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Another beautiful love poem. Very nice rhythm.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This is just as good as the first, and there's fresh ideas. Rhymes are good, and still you have the fillings. Your love poems make me smile :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You seem to end all of your poems in such a great way! The endings make the poems even better! You are a very talented writer! I am glad I have come across your work! I hope to read more! ~Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by celi

    hey, nice poem! especially the last "paragraph" ! 5/5