The moment i close my eyes

by cooldude900   May 22, 2005

The moment i close my eyes
its you i always see
the moment my mind starts to drift
its about you i always think
just that you are so far like the sky so blue
i feel your presence cause when iam with you my body would be with me but my
heart and soul are always with you
just the presence of you would make the flowers to bloom
just for you my love i would bring down the sun and the moon
the smile of yours melt the ice
its your pretty face i see on the six sides of a dice
i want to be with you i wanna say it loud and shout
cause my hearts feels is that what love is all about


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  • 13 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    So prettiful, James :) I love it..So cleverly written and so romantic.
    I'm sure whoever it was for will love it :)

    Take care of yourself darlin.
    All my love,

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Great job. Keep up the good work honey.


  • 13 years ago

    by crissy abalos

    i love it.sweet.touching:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Julie

    awww its beautiful James! I love it hunni, GREAT work!
    Love Julie
    Take care
    Love u heaps