I thought this was a really good poem! it really expressed how u felt and I bet your parents loved it. Please read/comment on some of my poems. maybe you'll like one. good luck with college, or where ever your life takes you :)

This is a pretty good little poem, you have a nice way of writing! if you get a chance, i'd like it if you looked at my poem, "Untitled 23". Thanks, Sarah

very nice poem, i loved it! For sure this poem will send tears to your parents eyes! congratulations and fly high!

Such a truely amazing poem. Keep it up. I love your work!
Love Sarah

great poem