nice! lol i was laughin my ass off! way to rhyme!

HAHAHA Good stuff I tell ya! I love this! I love how you used all different fairy tales and added the now NORMAL thing to do. LOL Very funny and definately unique! Nicely done!

lol, this was great. I don't find many funny poems that are actually funny like this.

Haha I like this poem. I wish I could do something like this. 5/5 Thanks for voting for my poem
Asian Luv Alwayz

That's soo funny...and soo true! hahahahaha...**Falls on floor, doesn't notice and rolls around in laughter**

holy cow! that's my favorite one yet!! gah! u are so creative! awesome job!! it kept me interested throughout the whole thing!! 5/5.. well duh! lol
love always,
abcede

i love this poem- ur comic approach is fascinating i hope u write more- i especially love the jack one.... well thanx for the comment and ill b expecting more comic fairytales from u ;-)
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Haha, I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was very original. Definity a 5

That was great!!!

I enjoyed reading it so much!! well done :)

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it seems long wen you look at it. but its not boring and it doesnt drag on. i loved it. keep up the good work xxx

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA THAT WAS SUPER DUPER KELWIMONDO DUDE LUVD IT!!!!!

That is a really cute poem, the beat is off in a couple of places, but it is really adorable

Great work! i love the uniqueness of it! very great!!! I LOVE IT!!! =]

Superb poem, verygood ending, keep it up.

This is my favorite thing ever! I'm printing it out and having my friends read it! Its so amazingly funny!!!! :]

A little llong you should have done it n 2 parts or something but apsart from that it's great.