This is truly a great poem. The sad thing is, people actually do this kind of stuff. Well written my friend! I must say I only COMMENT on the poems I truly like, others I just vote.....

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i almost cried

thats so sad :'( a touching story xox sam

Wow. i loved it. so well written, and expressed exactly what you were hoping for. Sad story, but good meaning. 5/5

Harsh... that was such a good poem. You're a terrific writer... its always remarkable to find someone that put feeling into their work and also make it flow right... i love reading poems like that! Well congrats... you're dope!
*Keep smiling*
Katy

It's really good! a friend at my school read this poem and showed it too me and i loved it soooo much!

Than for telling me!! u dont know how much i appericiate it!! i have filed copyright violation and sent her an e-mail about it! thanx again for showin me this!

Love is Suicide

Mariah Dawn!

OH MY GOD, that was such a BEAUTIFUL and AMAZING poem!!! it really got to me, it's soo emotional. i LOVED it, especially the ending. you're insanely talented, this was great 5/5!!

This is SOOOOOOOOOOO SWEEEEEEET.
I love this poem so much.Omg.I am speechless.I dont know what to say.But keep up the good work.And keep writeing poems like these.I love it .I love it.lol 5/5

This is really good i liked it a lot, its a poem that tells a story.

Thats soooo sad. it definitely made me cry. it's a very well-written poem 5/5

~KeLLy~

check out some of my poems if you get the chance! Thanks

That was one of the greatest poems that i EVER READ...i feel the same way as the girl with the gun...i love the way you wrote this,thank you.i really enjoyed this poem 5/5

I absolutely loved this poem. Exellent!