I know I've sort of fallen off of the poetry map, but I hope you enjoy this poem. Please vote/comment. Thanks in advance.

Hey, I thought this poem was extremely cute and precious, whoever the girl is, she is a lucky girl
-Behindmysmile

This was a very nice poem it read very well and the message left butterflies in my tummy. Good job...

So beautifully written! So full of love! Very well done! Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work! Take Care! Brooke~

Wow!! This took my breath away. Yes, whoever this girl is, she is VERY lucky!! Wonderful job on this poem.... I love it!!!! :D :D

~Amy~

sweetness...very good poem...I think it could be better if you didn't use as much rhyming (esp first stanza), but well done.

xxx

That is a beautiful poem and that girl is so very lucky to have an expressive guy like you! Another 5 for you!