Comments : Neglect

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    OMFG HUN. This was abSOLUTLEY amazing! So much intense emotion; very sad. It left me feeling empty and wanting to reach out and help you. I loved the description in this and the way you compared your mature; must be strong feelings with your more adolesent; child-like feelings. I loved it more than words could say! :D

    Luvvoo always <3.
    - Kallllll.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    omg this poem was so good, sent goose bumps down spine! sometimes it's nice to be alone, but once the lonleyness sinks in then it's nit nice at all, even worst is feeling lonely in a room full of poeple you know!

    ~i don't relate to my poetry, i just seem to reach those emotions, maybe they can make a difference for someone someday.~

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

    ~love your comments~

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    wow...absolutely beautiful!!!!! wow...i love it!!! great work. keep it up!
    -xXx-
    P.S. thanks for the comment. it means the world to me.

  • 18 years ago

    by joe

    good work bo...
    take care,
    -Allen

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Hee hee no problem. Thanx!

  • 18 years ago

    by -Jay-

    WOW omg!! your such a good writer!! I love your poems! Sorry i couldn't comment for all of them :D but i voted :) 5/5 for this one! keep up the wikid work!

    XxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Too cool, great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    cute sad poem! =) i like it! 25/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by A.Hill

    i love all of your poems...they're so sad/cool...
    love alwayz,
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg i toally pictured that as i read it. Really awesome... you're on my favourites you know!!
    take care hun, please x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    OMG that made me remember a time when I was little and I was so scared of the crawl space to the attic I could swear someone was watching me. Silly now !! Great poem , it held my interest till the very end