Comments : GIRL IN MIRROR

  • 20 years ago

    by Katran

    i love this poem, it rox! i can relate to it....not the lookin in the mirror bit....the girl bit...yeah...l8r

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Now this one was good, I liked what I saw.
    The feeling and emotion, left me in awe.
    I really liked how you'd start every line using those words, every time.
    Okay, this was grand... now, this is good work. By the way, Im sorry for being a jerk.
    But the Ripper was once a man I adored. He'd stalk through the night - ONLY KILLING wh0res.
    But anyways getting a little off track heres a 5/5, be nice, comment back.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good job on this one, keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    The mirror part was a good idea. ur own describtion of what u feel n what u see in ur reflection. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    That is sooo good.... i wrote something like it once, but a little different.... anyway, i love your writting.... its so... expressive... lots of love

    ~bekka baby

  • 9 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This poem is really good, there is always a time in life, where you just dont like what you see when you look into a mirror. you wonder why you are where you are at. and sometimes you wonder why you are so unhappy.

    Stay strong.